[profile] purestofprose Contest #27

Oct. 4th, 2011 12:15 pm
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100 Word Drabble Contest #27
Prompt: Memory

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"You have to help me! I can't bear to remember this!" The young woman dropped to her knees, clutching the hem of my skirts, franticly attempting to keep me from walking away.

I bent down, took her chin in my hand, and looked into her tear-filled eyes. "Why, child? Why are you so desperate to forget? You are young yet; memories fade with time. Mayhap the lesson learned is one best left in your mind and heart."

I pulled my skirts from her hands and walked away, not looking back though her wails began to echo through the streets.

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I'm still not 100% sure about this one - I may go in and edit it later.
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Date: 2011-10-04 05:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hopefulspirit.livejournal.com
I really like this. I think we've all had memories we'd like to forget, but they're usually the ones we need to remember most.

Nice job!

Date: 2011-10-04 08:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1-rhiannon-1.livejournal.com
Thanks babe! I really appreciate you reading it! I need to write more *g*

*huggles*

Date: 2011-10-10 08:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluegerl.livejournal.com
Strangely enough you made me feel as if it were me... I am/was that lady walking away... I am so old now, and have to walk away as I have found I cannot change things any more... I really liked (and yet did not 'like') this piece... very revealing...
Thank you for writing it... it is deep!

PS who is your very very dishy bannerman? (Not the skullface you daft girl, I mean the MAN in the HAT!!!! yummy)

Date: 2011-10-10 12:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1-rhiannon-1.livejournal.com
Thank you for reading it! :D I honestly have no idea where it came from, it just sort of came out when I looked at the prompt. I love it when that happens!

Mmm, my dishy bannerman is Andrew Lincoln as Deputy Sheriff Rick Grimes from The Walking Dead :o) He's my favorite tv boyfriend :D

Date: 2011-10-10 01:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluegerl.livejournal.com
MMmmmmm he is very nice. I don't know the series, as I think UK/Europe TV is screening differently. Andrew Lincoln...likes there's a touch of the Viggo face there... the chin???Nice yes!!!

And good luck with this next prompt! Hope its easier than the latest BF one. that is a stinker! see you dear lassie.

Date: 2011-10-10 02:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1-rhiannon-1.livejournal.com
I think the show airs on FX in the UK but I'm not certain about that. You may have seen some of Andrew's other work in the UK though - he was in Afterlife, This Life, Teachers... According to things I've read, he also does a lot of voice work in advertisements on tv and radio :)

Thanks! I'm kinda spotty with my participation but this one grabbed me so I had to play :) Good luck to you as well!

Date: 2011-10-18 08:52 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] justjo2u
Powerful stuff. This would be a wonderful opener to a longer story! Loved it!

Date: 2011-10-18 11:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1-rhiannon-1.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D For the moment, that's all I have on it but someday I may continue it :D

Date: 2011-10-19 10:59 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] justjo2u
I hopr you do ut I understand. Have the makings of a story started mnyself somewhere but there is never the time to continue it.

Date: 2011-10-19 02:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1-rhiannon-1.livejournal.com
I have a bunch that are in desperate need of editing too. Too many stories, not nearly enough hours in the day!

Date: 2011-10-19 04:28 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] justjo2u
God, there were so many typos in that comment. It should have read... "I hope you do but I understand. Have the makings of a story started myself somewhere but there is never the time to continue it.

The dog was bumping my arm as I typed. I didn't notice the typos at the time.

Yeah I am currently working on one original fic which might turn out to be novel length, but I have another short story on the go and a longer one that needs drastic editing. Not enough hours in the day!

Date: 2011-10-19 06:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1-rhiannon-1.livejournal.com
*grin* Not a problem - I have cats so I understood what you were trying to say. They tend to bump my arm a lot when I type too :o)

I have ideas for a bunch of short fics but I never seem to have time to really work on them. I have to pick and choose between fics, graphics, and email sometimes. :(

Date: 2011-10-19 06:35 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] justjo2u
I have a cat too but he keeps himself to himself. Not terribly sociable.

Same here! (Minus the graphics!) Then you have to add work, family, chores, shopping, other hobbies... sleep... I like to do that occasionally!

Date: 2011-10-19 08:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1-rhiannon-1.livejournal.com
Yes! I like to sleep occasionally too! Just think how much we could get done if we DIDN'T need sleep :D

Date: 2011-10-19 08:38 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] justjo2u
Yep, it's strange though. I often wake up in the early hours thinking about getting up and writing. I never wake up with the urge to go to work!

Date: 2011-10-19 08:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1-rhiannon-1.livejournal.com
Hahahaha! Oddly enough, that never happens to me either... Wonder why that is? ;-)

Date: 2011-10-19 08:40 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] justjo2u
Writing means being in my own little world. Going to work means interacting with the masses! Ugh...

Date: 2011-10-20 12:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1-rhiannon-1.livejournal.com
*nods* Yep, that would be the why. *sigh*

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