[profile] purestofprose Drabble Prompt: Wake

Nov. 17th, 2011 02:34 pm
lokis_mayhem: (rhistattoo - purestofprose)
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Don't ask me where this came from - I haven't the foggiest idea. *shrug*
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We fought hard, against what seemed like impossible odds. Every time one of the enemy fell, three more sprang up to take its place. On and on, the battle raged through the evening and into the night. Through it all, he stood by me, back to back, protecting me even as I defended him.

I don't remember being hit, or slumping to the ground, or the pain. All I remember is that, as I fought my way through the haze to wake up, I could feel his arms around me, strong and solid and real. "We made it," he whispered.

Date: 2011-11-17 09:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hopefulspirit.livejournal.com
I want more! :-)

Date: 2011-11-18 12:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1-rhiannon-1.livejournal.com
Thank you! <3 I'm not sure if there's more or not. I saw the prompt and this came out *shrug* That's what I get for reading zombie books before bed huh? I think I dreamed this.

Date: 2011-11-17 11:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] corellian-sugar.livejournal.com
I love little drabble fics like these where you can fit almost any name into the situation (in your head). Well done!!! :)

Date: 2011-11-18 12:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1-rhiannon-1.livejournal.com
Thanks honey! Me too - I like not really knowing who it involves so I can put whoever I want in there. :) Thankies!

Date: 2011-11-18 12:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] limelygreen.livejournal.com
Good job, once again :)

Date: 2011-11-18 12:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1-rhiannon-1.livejournal.com
:D Thank you! <3

Date: 2011-11-18 10:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] museofmyself.livejournal.com
Oooh, I like that a lot! Great job, Rhi!! :)

Date: 2011-11-18 03:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1-rhiannon-1.livejournal.com
Thank you very much sweetie! <3

Date: 2011-11-19 01:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] leticiae.livejournal.com
And then what happened?

Oh, this is such a tease of a tale. :)

Date: 2011-11-19 02:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1-rhiannon-1.livejournal.com
*grin* I'm not sure yet but I'll let you know when/if they tell me they want more of their story told :)

Date: 2011-11-22 10:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluegerl.livejournal.com
Splendid bit for picturing. Could have been Crusaders (which it was for me) but equally Saving Private Ryan stuff. Very evocative.. Also harassment at work!!!!! Its a lovely all-encompassing little video!

Date: 2011-11-22 02:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1-rhiannon-1.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D I like leaving it open for the reader to put their own characters in. I know who was in my head when I wrote it and I'm always interested to know what someone else saw :)


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